Talk:Players Guide Chapter 1: Difference between revisions
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Probably a good idea. | |||
Maybe you should edit the section on a different page, change it along your ideas and then we all have a look at it and compare with the old layout. If the new layout is generally accepted we can either reditect or copy the content over the old page and delete the work-page again. | |||
--[[User:Fellice|Fellice]] 09:59, 24 September 2006 (EDT) | |||
Revision as of 13:59, 24 September 2006
There is a lot of redundant text in this page. Each subheading for the different operating systems had almost identical text, with only a slight variation (commands to use). Does anyone agree that it would be clearer if each sub-heading was re-written to be a general account, and only the OS variances separated out in a sub-sub-heading?
--jonmack
Probably a good idea.
Maybe you should edit the section on a different page, change it along your ideas and then we all have a look at it and compare with the old layout. If the new layout is generally accepted we can either reditect or copy the content over the old page and delete the work-page again.
--Fellice 09:59, 24 September 2006 (EDT)